Monday, November 15

Poetry Potluck 1

for my first "Poetry Potluck" with Jingle Poetry we have the theme of Emotions, Moods & Feelings" this one is something simply fun!

Plain Excitement

cheering, joy indeed:
"Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay!"
"I've got it!"
and
"I'm going!"
Thoughts at sonic speed:
"preparations in a suitcase
inspirations in a new way"
Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay!

Excitement ever plain
Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay!
here I go again...
this time not quite the same
Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay!
this excitement is 'plane.'


LyndiaP November 15, 2010 (PoemADay Challenge 15 of 30 & Poetry Potluck submission)

9 comments:

  1. fun fun fun! totally fun! :)

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  2. LOve the fun coming across! Reread it a couple of times and nearly ended up shouting it out loud!

    http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2010/11/15/i-need-him/

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  3. love this,

    it is a pleasant read.
    Thanks for linking up with potluck.
    xx

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  4. A fun and rhythmic expression of excitement. Very enjoyable.

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  5. Beautiful expressions.. joyful and sweet
    I liked it so much. Thanks for sharing...

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
    Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com

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  6. Wooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    all smiles.

    my potlucks:
    http://wp.me/pU7yT-in
    http://wp.me/pU7yT-hS
    http://wp.me/sU7yT-tsunami

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  7. thanks for linking up with potluck.

    http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/11/16/moods-are-like-dark-woods-4-potluck-week-10/

    award/treats for you. smiles.

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  8. Good use of simple and common expressions. :]

    I'll have to apologize for not responding sooner, but for some reason, your comment on my poem fell under spam. I apologize for not replying sooner

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  9. Optimism is contagious. :)

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