for my first "Poetry Potluck" with Jingle Poetry we have the theme of Emotions, Moods & Feelings" this one is something simply fun!
Plain Excitement
cheering, joy indeed:
"Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay!"
"I've got it!"
and
"I'm going!"
Thoughts at sonic speed:
"preparations in a suitcase
inspirations in a new way"
Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay!
Excitement ever plain
Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay!
here I go again...
this time not quite the same
Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay!
this excitement is 'plane.'
LyndiaP November 15, 2010 (PoemADay Challenge 15 of 30 & Poetry Potluck submission)
fun fun fun! totally fun! :)
ReplyDeleteLOve the fun coming across! Reread it a couple of times and nearly ended up shouting it out loud!
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love this,
ReplyDeleteit is a pleasant read.
Thanks for linking up with potluck.
xx
A fun and rhythmic expression of excitement. Very enjoyable.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful expressions.. joyful and sweet
ReplyDeleteI liked it so much. Thanks for sharing...
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
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Wooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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my potlucks:
http://wp.me/pU7yT-in
http://wp.me/pU7yT-hS
http://wp.me/sU7yT-tsunami
thanks for linking up with potluck.
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award/treats for you. smiles.
Good use of simple and common expressions. :]
ReplyDeleteI'll have to apologize for not responding sooner, but for some reason, your comment on my poem fell under spam. I apologize for not replying sooner
Optimism is contagious. :)
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