Monday, November 22

MM WW

Levitate

You hover
in space
like you were born in that place

roll 'round
in the air
upside down as you dare

just watch
as I wait
trying to levitate

attempts
leave me bruised
spell-bound & confused

you warn
not to frown
as it's the coming down

... that's really the tough part.


LyndiaP November 22, 2010 (PoemADay 22 of 30 and submission to Jingle Poetry's Poetry Potluck - theme: MM WW - Magic & Miracles, Wonder & Wizardry)

7 comments:

  1. Ha! Unexpected ending--love that. I like how you used rhyme and created rhythm here. Nice!
    I decided to visit you in the potluck as I know it's not fun being last (you're listed last right now). Have fun!

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  2. real tough!!! :( I enjoyed the layout, well done!

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    awards/treats for you.
    Happy Wednesday!

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  4. Thanks for all the feedback!

    I'm glad to know others (like you Heather) read the last poster on the list!

    Hooray for Poetry Sharing!

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  5. This was so fun! Terrific!

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  6. You've really improved your rhythm over the month. This was wonderfully executed. It had the magical feel of being a children's game.

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