A Tile Sounding Floor
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click_____slish_____tump_tump_tump
__click__slish slish___timp tump__
timp_timp_timp________slissh______
________timp_timp_tump_tump_tump__
slish_____________________________
___slish__________chu-eh-ch-uh___
__slish_________ch-uh-ch-uh____ch
lish_______ch-uh_____ch-uh_______
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timp_timp_______________timp_____
__________________chu-eh chu-eh_
whishp whaa_____timp_timp________
wisshp-aah___wishp_timptimp ch-uh
___timp____________timp__________
timp_____________timp____________
____________________whishp_aah___
_____________________________whis
__________ad nausea
LyndiaP November 19, 2010 (PoemADay 19 of 30)
This is really cool. I actually read your poem outloud, making all the sounds! It was fun, haha. The style is a gimmick obviously, but I love how you are exploring the definition of what a poem could be. Pushing boundaries, testing yourself, experimenting - that is really how you grow as an artist (and as a person).
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