So today's #Reverb10 Prompt? Well, it sounds a bit like preventing (or analyzing) regret... in a way? Well, you decide. But my response will include a poem so I can also submit it to the Poetry Potluck at Jingle Poetry.
2010 Reflective Prompt #20
Beyond avoidance: What should you have done this year but didn't because you were too scared, worried, unsure, busy or otherwise deterred from doing? (Bonus: Will you do it?)
My List
There were long lines
spaces too rare
waiting and doing
avoiding a snare.
I checked off pragmatics
I conquered a fear
I completed my goals
and missed something dear
now that I'm leaving
I finally see
many bleak days of toil
were really time to be free.
Too hurried to enjoy
rather scurry than wait,
and at the end of this employ-
ment, I know now - it's been great.
a less poetic translation
of what I just said
sometimes work is more
then what was stuck in my head.
Some days I was down
on my job- it's apparent
on my job- it's apparent
were all just great chances for my
perspective to be transparent
not that I lost all shots
to learn something new
I know I did many times
but missed quite a few...
poem by LyndiaP December 20, 2010
lovely flow,
ReplyDeletemissing a few is normal..
thanks for the beautiful entry.
A+
Tempo and message great.
ReplyDeleteTotally relate-able Lyndia.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the visit.
Pamela
you must be having fun at work haha! mines here- http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/01/23/painted-hallways/
ReplyDeletethanks everyone! :)
ReplyDelete